Laraso's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[ThDrk-Defense]

Seriously?

I sure hope this was some kind of cruel, sarcastic joke because this flash was abysmal. I waited through about one and half minutes of slow scrolling text that I could not skip only to be presented with a picture of a head with crudely drawn arms and legs, with instructions to click on crudely drawn pictures of clocks. By clicking these clocks, they begin to bleed and lose what passes for limbs. I could have made this in less than thirty minutes. If you were truly, truly serious about this flash, put at the VERY least (bare minimum, possibly even below the minimum) 2 hours of work into it. Make is seem like you actually care about your work, and you might fare better in the portal.

EtchASketchClock responds:

Says the guy who made 3 versions of a game where you try not to let your mouse touch a bunch of circles.

[Gravity Football 2]

The text and AI is mediocre

This could be a decent time wasting game, but the text is rather ugly in my opinion and the AI doesn't even attempt to steal the ball away from you.

ilMareGames responds:

can you tell me what text you found ugly?
Thanks for your comment!

[Overdrive 0.7]

"please comment on how it could be improved."

Here are a few points that I feel should be improved:

> Car controls feel abnormal. That isn't good in a game like this. These should be optimized and should be your #1 priority to prefect this before finishing your game. I can't stress that enough.

> The music at the start is quite generic and low quality, and on top of that it doesn't loop. I would suggest getting different music. Also, the second music doesn't loop at all.

> There isn't really any challange, besides the danger of running into the occasional car or two. All you have to do is get to the green arrow, which occasionally doesn't work (if you drive into the arrow nothing happens).

> Hit boxes feel weird, I was driving by a green car and it said I crashed. Hit boxes seem abnormally large.

> Graphics could be better, static images like that don't give that much of a feel for a game. Rotating tires would make the game seem faster.

I rated 5/10 because it is still unfinished, however if you were to release the game with it still looking like this I would most certainly rate it a zero.

I hope I helped.

beasco responds:

how could the steering be improved. sharper turning?

[The World's Hardest Game]

I love this game.

Back in 8th grade, me and my friends would all play this game during computer class to see who could get the farthest. I would usually be like 12 levels ahead of them. I almost completely forgot about this game until today, when I suddenly had the crave to play all of those old, great flash games. I gotta finish this. Its an awesome game, that really requires ones skill to beat the game. There is just one problem though: I remember on level 7, if you did not move up or down, and just kept going left or right, you would be invincible.

Snubby responds:

Yeah that's true. Just didn't notice that bug while testing it, and once its released its too late.

thanks